Journal Exercise: Sensory Paragraph: One:
Observe a routine occurance this week and write one sensory image paragraph. A sensory image paragraph should include all five of your senses and one use of figurative language (similie, metaphor, etc.).
The bus roared down the dirt road, like a train down the tracks, sending dust flying up into the air. The tiny particles of sand landed on ones skin like tiny insects, causing one to itch at the intruders. As the cool breeze blew, the scent of lilacs hung in the air. It was spring, and the world was coming to life once more. The yellow behemoth pulled up to a stop, it’s air breaks hissing like snakes, assulting ones ears. The young girl hastily grabbed her backback, and hurried down the isle to the door. Stepping off the bus, her smile shown like the bright sun. She was home, and quite happy to be there.
Okay…I know I’m missing taste…Though I can’t seem to figure out how to fit it in there. I think I got the rest of them in there, and the required bit of figurative language.
~And one the Smut Lord is sure to appreciate. *laughs* (I actually have quite a few I think fit this line)
*Has yet to be named* Dec.14,1992
The flesh is alive
feel the need
the passion inside
you can not heed
The flesh is bare
nails dig deep
lust keeps you awake
you can not sleep
You need a release
there’s only one way
come into my arms
here you’ll stay
Feel my lips
upon your neck
feel my hands
caress your back
Feel the flesh
that burns alive
a heated soul
that can not die
I can’t help it…that makes me think of a succubus. *laughs*
it makes me feel a bit scared that poem… very good thats a good thing it means i m feeling something lol the paragraph is good too 😛 i may jot one about my way home today xxx
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Good paragraph! And that wasn’t lame or bad or whatever you called it over the phone. Much better than I could ever do! Yay for more poems! Smut Lord likes this one. Hehe. ~
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sheeeesh tell me about we should demand more characters!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE gleeeeeaaaaned… cool word 😛 xxx
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o0o me like the poem and very nice paragrph.
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You continue to impress me with your writing style.
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