Poetry
Bind her corset tight
turn her face
against the light
Decieved by little white lies
wrapped in little red boxes
Despite the warning signs
the fine print printed
in between the lines
See pride doth come before the fall
but a quiet one
now she’ll destroy us all.
I like that very much. *half-smile* -Fey
Warning Comment
pretty fcking awesome sounds about right to me. i really like it. <3,
Warning Comment
I absolutely love it! though, to be honest, I’d personally get rid of “little” in the first line that says it.. just ‘cuz you say it right after, but also ‘cuz then it flows more in my head. but thats my head, which doesn’t always sit well with others…sooo, ignore moi svp lol anyways, I love it – it is pretty fncking awesome, I do agree! 🙂 take care
Warning Comment