she’s not as stable as she thinks
the knife sits on the table
like an old forgotten friend
waiting to be remembered
waiting to be rejoined
with the skin it knew so well
the familiar feel of the wood
the old glint in the metal
the twinge of the edge
brings memories of fond times
with each flick of the blade
the frienship is renewed
omg thats amazing, like the story of my struggles I love you rory!
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nice, i like it…
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I try not to think of it that way…lol. My mom told me to just get rid of the green cheese and it would be fine…I couldn’t do it. *GAGS* Carly 🙂 Thanks for the note!
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oh, and RYN, bout me not bein repsonsible for other ppl’s happiness. i know that, but then its also such a great feeling when u make someone happy, or cheer them up when theyre depressed, i love doin that. i just gotta remember to be responsible for my own happiness sometimes.
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Much thanks for the compliment you left…though I fail to see how someone so immensely talented herself could be jealous of my own… I would hope that no one would have the talent that I do…for to have the talent I do would mean they would have lived my life…and my life I wish upon no one but myself. At any rate, do take care and be well. -Adam
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That was awesome. Powerful… Thank you for your notes on the whole James thing. They helped me out a lot. Its a situation that sucks but, he’ll be the one missing out. Its not my loss, its his. So he can go sit on a stick and spin. And hey, if you’re not doing anything, you should come down to Buffalo or Boston and come to warped with us. Warped Tour shouldn’t be missed. Yellowcard is going to
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be there and Yellowcard rocks. But yea, their lryics are amazing. Ryan Key is an amazing song writer…heck, the whole band is. I just love them…Ok I could go on for days about Yellowcard. But thanks again for your notes. Take care and I’ll talk to you later *Heather*
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This is very enigmatic as it reminds me of myself many many moons ago when I’d wake up in the morning and muster the courage (!) to self harm myself.
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Rory – To be totally honest, some of the most inspiring and beautiful poetry I have ever read isn’t focused… When you focus, and you aim to write, instead of just losing control and feeling for words instead of thinking them up, your poetry can come off too clean, too polished, too artificial, and a reader can pick up on that. So the fact that you can tap into that deep seeded feeling…
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…and lose yourself within it is a talent I know many people crave. Do be well. -Adam
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Hey thanks for your note and the compliment…i wish i was older some days…but alas..im only 15..i know cus my rents are still driving me crazy…and i am still totally imature 90% of the tym…lol…well keep it all cool…BTW powerful
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Hey Rory RYN – I mean that no matter how talented you are with language (in your case incredibly…frightenly almost), there are just some things that words are insufficient to describe. Even the most fitting terms would act as insult to the beauty (or conversely horror) of the moment. You certainly don’t fall short in your descriptions Rory, don’t let anyone tell you otherwise. Gavin 🙂
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wow.. you have amazing talent.. keep writting xoxo
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Totally HOT, Totally. That’s amazing. Rock on girl! 🙂
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