Enough poem
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Sometimes the nights not long enough
To make yesterday heal
Sometimes the pills dont work enough
To kill off what I feel
Sometimes the suns not bright enough
To chase away the grey
Sometimes there isnt hope enough
To push me through the day
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Sometimes escapes not long enough
To make my smile stay
Sometimes the knifes not dull enough
To keep the scars away
Sometimes the fields not flat enough
To make the game seem fair
Sometimes love isnt strong enough
To fend off my despair
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Sometimes words just arent deep enough
To share all thats inside
Sometimes time isnt long enough
To revive what has died
Sometimes there isnt strength enough
To walk another mile
Sometimes good times arent long enough
To make the bad worthwhile
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Sometimes friends cant be close enough
To hold to when I cry
Sometimes there isnt truth enough
To counter every lie
Sometimes a laughs not long enough
To wash away the sad
Sometimes God isnt real enough
To change a life gone bad
Awwww Jaimie, that was really sad 🙁 And I’m sorry I can’t be there to make things just a little better, I hate not being able to do anything. 🙁
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I like your poem it is sad and depressing and that is what I like =) thanx for the note check you later
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*hugs* Thanks for the note. Sorry things are looking a bit down for you lately.
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🙂
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tears* this is so sad…
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awww, okay, yeah I’ll be like the other lame noters and say yeah I had some tears. I loved that though and I loved “A perfect world” and “pain”. your a really good writer. and I love the pictures you did!!! You can’t fix me I’m
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that photo is disturbing…
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well yes, i suppose, but why is either necessary in the first place…?
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i am sorry, i did not mean for my last note to come off teh way it evidently did… i was merely curious, not aiming to criticize. i apologize.
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and i am sorry you are sad.
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That is so sad. Love ya. Hugs. Kisses. etc. Astrid
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Sometimes we wake tomorrow, and things are a little better than they were.
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it was good but sad ****HUGS****
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ryn: yeah i copied it 🙂
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Hey thnx for ur note. come by again sumtime=) I really like ur poem. I hope u feel better soon…
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Aww sweetie, this is sad. But it is beautifully written.
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im a random, but that was beautiful. heartfelt. stay sweet. and takecare. x.
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Hey I got you on random, this poem was amazing. Extremely well written. I know I can’t say anything that’ll make you feel any better or make your world seem a little brighter but I can tell you I think you’re strong inside to still be here holding the pain inside you obviously bear from reading this entry. I hope things seem brighter soon, take care xx
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I read and read and read, and you are a fantastic writer. I love every poem you have posted. On the other hand, Im sorry that life seems to be down right now. it can only get better, right?
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