Whipped

Hit from the left

Punch from the right

The lights go out

And soon it is night

Rise up again

To be pushed back down

Everything holding

Your head to the ground

*

Life is a fight

That no one can win

And I know that I

Have no more fight within

Punches of life

Make me feel so numb

I just bend over

Take whatever may come

*

Life is a game

Without a timeout

No referee

In this title bout

Try to arise

Just to fight one more day

Society comes and

Takes it all away

*

So here I lay

Beaten and bruised

Life is the victor

So nothing’s new

Here I lay hopeless

Only a shell

Life is the winner

At the final bell

*

So yeah, my day sucked and I sat down to write and this came out.

*

“Wasted youth and mad as hell

My friends keep asking me

Are you ok man your eyes are blazing

I can’t get over it

This shit is killing me

My body’s aching, hands are shaking

*

I’m cutting down, you heard the line

Whisky in the morning one more time

Hit that cigarette, Colt 45

Whisky in the morning

Can’t stop drinking

Gonna die.”

*

Buckcherry

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April 3, 2003

Well your poem was much better than the lyrics at the end! You really do rock Jaimie Joel! I’m sorry your day sucked so bad! I had to watch the rudolph movie which is actually just a really long cartoon..so yeah that kinda sucked. But other than that I had a great day, so I’m not in your crappy state of mind right now :o( I sorry! But on the bright side I posted today :oD

April 3, 2003

Oh I was gonna tell you something. But I just forgot what it was…crap I hate it when that happens. only one month and thirteen days until I come see you…arent you excited?!?! I’m so happy ;o) Oh my GOSH! LoL I just had to say that! Anywayz, I’ll talk to you later! *hugs* luv ya much!

April 3, 2003

Sometimes that happens to me. I usually delete those entries because mine always suck ass. 😉

April 5, 2003

Heya Jaimie Joel! Wassup? long time no chat. I think you should be on so I could talk to you. I’m bored and I have a headache! But anywayz, I’m not so sure what to say right now! I really do like that poem!!! As I’ve said before! Anywhose, I’ll talk at you later! luv ya

wow…it has been too damn long J. I bet you will be surprized to get this..hehe. Love the poem. Know the feeling. Later babe,-M (tag, your it)

RYNs: Believe it or not I didn’t get online at all this weekend. Sometimes I just stare at the poopter (computer) and just sit there going “What the Fuck?” and have no clue what I’m doing and that was one of those weekends/days so I just stayed away from it. Hehehe. But it would indeed be pretty cool to hang out sometime. 🙂

April 8, 2003

heya jaimie joel! wassup? not to much going on here! Oh of course I knew you guys were engaged, I just didnt know thats what she looked like…so yeah I was surprised! lol I never answered your question huh? thats cuz there is no answer. I dont think I’m getting married anytime soon. But the things going on made for a killer poem. But I’m not the one dreaming about anyone…so yeah!