My Sucky Poem
Nature’s Picasso
Everyday that I step out
Mother Nature embarks on another masterpiece
She splashes the sky with the ocean clue
then delicately places clouds in the sky
as if it was as fragile as glass
To finish it off, she chisels the Sun to her satisfaction
As her signature, she meticulously blooms the flowers once again
Everyday that I step out
Mother Nature embarks on another masterpiece
She splashes the clouds on the sky
But wait!
She laughs at herself
She says, “This is what I need”
and proceeds to do over her creation
After toiling long hours, She produces MY greatest picture:
a beautiful summer day with no clouds in the sky!
Everyday that I step out
Mother Nature gently drops the leaves to cover
the Earth like sprinkles on an ice cream
She giggles to herself with glee.
She decides to color the leaves with great precision
This is yet another masterpiece from Mother Nature
Everyday that I step out
Mother Nature tickles the trees with the cold weather
and colors the grass with depressing colors
She sighs and continues perfecting her craft;
constantly stamping out her reputation as Nature’s Picasso.
I think it kind of sucks :-
How can that suck?! It’s great!!!
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joe stop kidding your self that was beautiful i love it.. byebye jeannie
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Joe, what you talkin’ bout?That poem is really good 🙂
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🙂
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hey i think the poem is great! keep up the good work 🙂 talk to you laters Jocelyn
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Its real good hun. Just one thing, u might wanna show it where it has different verses instead of all run together. Otherwise i like it. Cya, Lizzie
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It’s fantastic =)
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i dont think it sucks
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:o)
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how can you say it sucks? Ive always wanted to write something very simulair showing the way Mother Nature paints the world with the vibrant colors and energies I think it is beautiful dear *hug* dont be so hard on yourself RYN: trying to snuggle up with the blankie and cocoa =) celibrate comfort day with me? do you some good if you can =) *hug*
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i like the poem a lot!! You should try writing more.
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