My 7th Grade Story Finished

“Hold it you’re under arrest.” shouted the bulky officer. “Wait! You’re Brian Curtise, but why did you turn to crime? Anyway you will rescue twenty years in prison.” “Look I’m innocent I didn’t stael a thing. I was in the ice cream parlor the whole time.” “Save that for the judge!”

later on the news, “Today the citizens of the United States are in shock as they hear that maybe Brian Curtise turned to crime. We have seen footage that Brianstole a computer, and was arrested on charges of theft. We will keep you posted as this story develops. This is Don Farmer Channel Two Action News.”

“Yes! [pauses] Finally Brian will be put out of my misery forever! Now no one can stop us!” exclaimed Adam Cochran. Adam pauses, as he recognizes the two henchman, Dulac, and Kelly. “Sir, I’m afraid I have bad news, the police are coming here right now! said Dulac. “You idiot it can not be. How did they discover our hideout?” “I do not know.” replied Butler. “I know how .” “You do?” “Yes it was Dulac who dropped the note.”replied Kelly. “You see after some guy tackled him , Dulac noticed that the note was missing.” “That clumsy easel because of him we just might get arrested!”

Soon we hear sirens, and soon twenty specially- trained policeman brake the door door. Now these policeman are struggling with the gang. One used a kick to parlyze Kelly, and another used the move called ‘the double whammy’ to knock out two more gang members. Then we see Brad using a right-left combination to send another gang member spwaling.

Then Adam, and Brad are fighting each other. First, Adam kicked Brad in the stomach, and hit him in the face with a three punch comination. “Pathetic, I expected a better challenge.” “Well I’m just getting warmed up. Let’s dance!” Then Brad used a ten hit combination that made Adam regroup. They kept hitting each other until they were both exhaused. Then Brad hit Adam with a tornado kick that made Adam never get up.

“Freeze you’re under arrest.”

After the gang had been round-up Brad freed Elaine who kissed Brad on the lips, and thanked him and the police.

After Brad told the police the truth all charges have been denied. Soon Brad asked Elaine if she could marry him, and she said “Hold your horses, an I’ll say yes in about 2 or 3 years.”

Then after everything was fine The family and Brad had a joyful dinner of rice, roast, corn bread and macaroni and cheese.

We are know inside the courthouse as we see a big stocky man. “Order in the court. The criminal by the name of Adam Cochran will receive 20 years in prison. On charges of kidnapping, theft and the demand for money. Adam Cochran is guilty of all charges. All charges on Brian Curtise has been dropped case is ajorned.

Then Dulac faced charges of theft. Kelly was faced with charges of theft and framing. “Dear what’s the matter.” “After Adam’s sentence is over, I’ll be he’ll come after me until he succedds. Until then I must be careful, and make sure nothing happens to us again!”

Meanwhile at the jail, “I don’t get how I didnt succedde, but next time everything will change. The next time we meet the Curtises and Brad will wish they never knew me, and shall be destroyed if its the last thing I do!”

Hehehe looking back on what I wrote, I have to laugh at some of the things I wrote back then. The year was probably ’94-’95 and I was a 7th grader as you know. On the little comment thing, the teacher gave me a 95. I still have the grade sheet. Everything was excellent except for clear setting (good), realistic characters (very good), verb tenses (very good), and spelling (very good). She wrote, “Every new speaker should be a new paragraph.” I didn’t know that at the time hehe. I’m also surprised I wrote about Elaine and Brad wanting to get married (she was 13!). I also hadn’t specified who Brian Curtise was or described these people in more detail. All-in-all, I’m satisfied with how I wrote it *smiles*. Hope you enjoyed it.