Prom Night Finished

“FREEZE!” Trey Moore said. Trey and his friend Hector Cruz are troublemakers and they love to harass young women. Hector is chunky, short, and wears glasses while Trey is of medium build and thick.

“Well well well, if it isn’t Mr. Quarterback and his hot girlfriend,” remarked Hector.

“What do you want Hector?” Victor asked.

“I just want a date with your girl,” turning to Claudia, he smiles at her. “What do you say baby. Will you go out with me on a date you’ll never forget,” Hector punctuates the word “never” by slapping her butt.

“Ugh, Hector, you fat pig! I will NEVER go out with you. I would advise for you to leave me alone or else I’m going to kick your ass,” Claudia barked.

“Nobody, says no to my man Hector,” Hector’s friend Trey grabs Claudia’s arm.

“You have two seconds to remove your hand or else you’re going home without one!”

“I’d like to see that baby,” Trey hooks his arms behind Claudia’s and Hector stands in front of Claudia with his fists clenched.

“Victor! HelMMMMMMMMMHMM” Trey covers her mouth.

“Hey Victor, aren’t you going to help out your girl?” Hector taunts. “You know, your girl is very sexy,” Hector places his hands on her breasts. “Now, it’s time for me to punish you for not taking me up on that date.” As soon as he says ‘date’, Claudia kicks her foot forward catching Hector in the groin causing him to double over in pain. In that same instant, she steps on Trey’s knees and foot, thumb his hips, weave herself out of Trey’s grasp. Then, she breaks his arm, palms his crotch, and puts him in a nerve hold. After holding the position for five seconds, she lets him go. Claudia then heads over to Hector and puts him in what is called the “Goose Neck Come Along”.

“Hey baby, what do you say? Should I take him with us or leave him here along with his friend?”

Smiling, I say, “I think he’s humiliated enough knowing that a girl kicked his ass.”

“Not without a kiss first,” I happily oblige and give her a nice kiss on her lips. You see, my girlfriend is a 2nd degree black belt. She has kicked many guys’ ass before—including her abusive ex. Looking at my clock, I am alarmed to see that it is already 1 a.m.. I need to get her home as soon as possible.

After packing up our picnic, I thought to myself whether or not I made a mistake by not giving her the promise ring. I don’t know if she was going to say yes, or if she would say no. I know one thing: I will not let tonight’s event keep me from giving her that promise ring. I love her too much to give up now.

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June 6, 2002

Glad to hear things worked out ok… how’d things go with the ring? Your girlfriend sounds like she’d be good friends with Buffy 😉 ♥

lolz… nice add!! me likes… its all great… except the part where you had the descriptions of the guys in paranthesis. you could have just added that after their lines. just a suggestion. take care hun. keep up the good work. toodles isabel

He he, that was a cool ending! I liked your story, the only thing I can fault with it is that you go into too much detail when describing the characters. Apart from that, I loved it 🙂

June 7, 2002

:0) Great Story Joe. :0) Very lovey dovey, even with all the twists and turns. :0)

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yah!!! Awesome!! Finally the end! I was biting my nails on that one 🙂 LOL…But great story! I loved it 🙂 *Muah*