Bear with me

I would like to thank everyone who commented on my story so far. Don’t be fooled; what I posted is not the complete chapter I have in mind. Instead, chapter 1 will be done at the end of Victor’s junior year. My plan is to write about prom, the picnic, and then any tidbits that’s left of his junior year.

The main focus will be his senior year. I want it to be a year where he endures hardships but triumphs in the end. One of the things that will happen is that he will be benched o the football team. I have debated on whether or not I should have Victor and Claudia martial artist. My thinking was that I would have them both in a tournament where they spar against each other for first place. I’m not sure though.

First off, I’d like to thank my homette Kelly for providing me with the description for Claudia’s dress(the description is the dress Kelly actually wore for Prom), and the description for Elizabeth’s dress (her friend wore that dress). I have never been to Prom so bear with me if my description is inaccurate. I will use my experience at a ball our band was invited to during the Gator Bowl festivities. So I am going to kinda improv my way.

(If anyone can give me pointers for the usual happenings at prom let me know).

I have also looked at limo sites to make my description more credible. During RAW (9-11 et), I am going to write the next part of the story and will have prom finished by tonight (hopefully). Well that’s it. Feel free to comment.

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June 3, 2002

🙂

SO that is why you asked me about writing stories. If you need any help I can help you. Unless it is grammer. Cause I don’t understand that. See what I mean.

June 18, 2002

*smiles*