Poetry: Where Am I Wrong?

Where Am I Wrong?
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I’ve done what you ask
And where have I gone?
Sitting alone, weeping,
Wondering where I’m going wrong.

Never a winner in this game;
Never easy to place blame.
Subtle reason to hold on
To what’s left of my good name.

The things I used to know
Are only memories now.
The goals in reach, no letting go,
Just getting there is learning how.

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I hope you understand this. A little deeper thoughts required on this one.

AllSoakingWet

*hugs*

Chlorine

Wow. Nice.

cool!

my first thought… GROSS! (~k)

my second thought… well, there’s a lot of those… so I guess I should just wait and see what develops in my mess of thoughts… ~k

Green Eyed

October 27, 2004

::: huggggs ::: everything changes. things will get better. not your own fault.

yourdesire;

*hugs* Take care xoxo

InTeReStInG, HoW FeW MeN CaN SuFfIcE ThE WoRdS Of PaIn… KeEp ThE InK FlOwInG… ~Avengelyne~

=O( thats how i feel. bah. isabel

mad4rob

hi honey. i’m sorry i make you sad. *cries* i love you. i’m sorry.

Annabell

October 28, 2004

that is awesome. completely awesome. lol you are such a good writer! 🙂

Journeyman

I understand and I like!

CrystalMe

November 7, 2004

*hugs* I need some happy and hopefuly Joe poetry, anyhow our short chat on the phone made me smile 🙂 Always, Sara