OceanBreeze

March 20, 2004

Poetry: Walking

Walking
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Walking today,
I heard the sound
Of chirping birds.
Their poignant cries
Remind me of a child’s biting words.

Crying just the same
Longing food for their beaks,
Their destitute beckoning
Heeded by mothers of the weak.

Soon they will feast
And starvation will subside;
The cycle will begin again
Until the baby says goodbye.

Walking brought me sadness
At their frets on the wind,
But I know mother will care
And daddy will defend.

aww. how beautiful. isabel

I agree with that note above… very beautiful! Great writing once again a pleasure to read ( sorry not signed in)KeriBrokenTearDrop

Destiny

March 21, 2004

I miss you…You stopped visiting me!! 🙁 *pouts*

not your best. i was kind of disappointed. maybe thats just me. i like poetry about people, and life. nature kind of bores me. 😀 *shrug*

yourdesire;

March 21, 2004

beautiful Take care xoxo

Beautiful I loved it!

Wordslinger

March 21, 2004

Very pretty, your work always amazes me.

Chopped Liver

March 22, 2004

: )

JustWannaBeLoved

March 23, 2004

hhmmm…. that wouldn’t by any chance have anything to do with the ducks that think you are “momma” would it? heh Good poetry either way!

mad4rob

March 24, 2004

LOL@ the ducks that think you’re the mamma…. baby, i think that was a good poem! different from your normal stuff – and good! *smooches* i love you!

aesthetical

March 25, 2004

I like this alot just looking through random diaries and happened to find yours you write beautiful work check out my diary sometime and let me know what you think take care

RYN: glad you liked my card. i must remember the return address label next time. anyways, hope all is well read my diary for an update on my sore mouth. laters! 🙂

Wordslinger

March 27, 2004

RYN: Thank you for your note.

Yep, that’s nature’s way.

Lonely Aphredite

March 31, 2004

And just where are you?

have not seen ya on for awhile, no notes or anything. is everything OK? keep me in the loop. 🙂

where’d ya go? is everything OK? i am gonna write ya soon i think. it’s been a while. laters!

i’m getting really worried i have not heard anything from ya in awhile. you doin’ OK? see ya soon (hopefully!) happy easter!

chibijulie

April 11, 2004

*LOL*!!!!!!! this poem is very nice. ^^ it has a lot of hert in it, and made me feel warm, but at the same time kinda sad, what would happen if mommy and daddy weren’t there to defend? ^_~ and yuesh..i too thought of the baby duckies. *( SMILES)* wanders off.

Hey, I think your work is nothing short of amazing. I wish I had a gift like you do. I read your entry on requests and if it’s not to much trouble I was wondering if you could write a poem for me. See, I am in love with this guy and he’s confused about his world. He doesn’t know what to do and he’s tricked himself to believe that he’s in love with his ex. His ex did really evil things to him…

and then she dumped him. I wish he would wake up and realize what is around him… so many people love him and he’s truly a great person. Thank you 🙂

Fallen Words

April 14, 2004

just beautiful = )

Lonely Aphredite

April 22, 2004

Where have you gone dear friend?

beingmeisbest

April 23, 2004

Nice writing . very cool . peace from