Me Explorer

November 20, 2003

A drop in the bucket

The word

It reveals the small quiet beautiful things
where before the flight blurred certain facets
it makes clear what once was beyond my vision
the shapes of dreams shift in its dawning
and its dawning is slow and continues
past each sunrise into the next revelation

It moves past my capacity to define it
bids me do nothing but let it live
within me and around me and for me
accept and give and remember
when other voices evoke shadows and demands not in it
or the aching part of me is loud and tyrannical
then I am to listen to its whispered imperatives
gently wrap myself in its miracle

DragonKat

November 21, 2003

Good Morning 🙂

Chrys.

November 21, 2003

what an ethereal whitter, ME! Happy Friday!

*huggles* love you and your poetical whitters dear friend!

I don’t know how you do it day after day but you must surely have pages and pages at home. You are one talented lady. :o)

MageB

November 21, 2003

🙂

Armiel

November 21, 2003

***hugs***

Woman of many hats..

November 21, 2003

*hugs* and smiles!

Pete's owner

November 21, 2003

Happy thinking back.

Beautiful miracle within which to wrap yourself. Beautiful whitter too : ) Happy Huggles

wow. ..this one really spoke to me. Although, I likely interpreted it all wrong and it means something totally different. 🙂

Gorgeous!

ryn..well, then, let me just say..that last stanza..do whitters have stanzas or is that just poems..?:) The last one sums up the bittersweet act of grieving that Was, yesterday..when I sat with Sarah on the couch and Remembered. Thanks ME!

Starr418

November 21, 2003

WoW I just realized.. lol its Friday already.. *smiles* hope you have a lovely weekend.

The Rickster

November 21, 2003

I especially like this one….have a good weekend! 🙂

This is a wow….A wonderful poem, sweet poet. Warm hugs and smiles

songbird

November 21, 2003

This is lovely….”gently wrap myself” into the warmth of studied acceptance. I like this whitter…I think it is a magic I need to take into myself… Hugs

i enjoyed this 🙂

MageB

November 21, 2003

Hugs,

Do you just get sudden bursts of inspiration? lol Your poetry is so beautiful =)

so lovely, and thank you for your kind note. love to you, x

Eddy Styx

November 22, 2003

to find such a thing and place would truly be a wondrous thing… I just dropped by to say goodbye, for now. I shall be back in about ten days.

noko

November 22, 2003

The evocation of birds in flight. For me at least a whole flock was released here.

Ultimatepoem

November 24, 2003

Ooh… *spark* This is very provocative. I was compelled to read it twice. *still chewing carefully on it’s content*