The story wants to continue
But it wants to take its time apparently.
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Oh but how massive they were, these enclosing giants! What ancient trees had been used to craft them? And the metal that extended half across each one, near the top and near the bottom. As she neared the castle she saw that what from below had looked like nothing more than the slightest crack of an opening was in fact wide enough to slip through easily.
Amazed at her own boldness, she did just that.
She was assaulted first by smells; of dung, of rotting meat, of muddy earth. All made more potent by being held within the massive walls of the castle. Then there was the sound of deep loud snoring. Just inside the gates lay two men who seemed to have fallen asleep right there, on the ground. Each had a spear lain beside him at an odd angle; helmets lay just above their heads and must have fallen off as they fell down. Some gatekeepers! Well, she didn’t suppose she should judge them too harshly; after all, here she was, inside the castle yard! Around the edges of the yard lay five other men. It would seem there had been some sort of feasting at the castle.
Her uncle had once been a servant at the castle. Many had been the nights he would describe the feasts he had seen in his years of service, which ended when a cauldron of soup was upended, scalding his arm and making him unfit for service. Her parents had taken him in, and the family felt themselves paid in full by the stories he told in those few years he lived with them before the Great Sickness came over the land.
Still reading and now waiting… A good read most definitly and waiting for more. Love and hugs,
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You are such a natural storyteller. Shall we light a fire and make s’mores? all this girl scout training must not go to waste!
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I think this has gone from an “idea for a story” to a “story.” 🙂
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Uhuh, it is taking on a life of its own ; ) Hope you enjoy sharing it as much as we enjoy it. Hugs & Smiles
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I’m really loving this!!! I can’t wait to read the next installment! 🙂
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*smiles* MOre more more hehe
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mayhap i should have waited to read, so i could just keep on reading! *sits patiently, waiting* 🙂
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It’s moving along very well. Keep going. Smiles & Hugs
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Holding you in a warm hug. Kissing your sweet face and tucking you in with love. Peaceful dreams darling Seeker. *smiles*
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waiting too
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This has very much a fairy tale feel about it. With a smile…
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*blink blink* …this is like a good begining to an rp. … *stare*
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This is getting very good!
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