Me Explorer

October 6, 2003

A couple of … uh huh …. whitters

Breezes in the night
take my care to her
wrap her in it
in my spirit

Gently
let love light within her
some desire wash over her
remind her that I need her
to me she is more beautiful
than all of nature’s wonders

Remember that she is fragile
so much inside that she bursts
tell her I send this
my spirit and my love
as I seek to come to her
and await her here as well

What is possible
will you carry us toward it
and waft through the time we need
as we have it

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This

It is new
but it insists on being defiant
rebelling against all my efforts
to express it

You were right
of course
when you advised against labels
this has no such thing
but oh the effects
the closest things I come up with
too trite and overused
too tired to convey something
so powerful and so revolutionary
in my interior reality

In the eyes I looked into
the other night
was shared experience
a blanket over one’s lap
on a long cold ride
but in yours I see a universe
rampant with my soul’s need
words will not organize themselves
to tell this

A whisper tremulous through tears
it is vast
it is a new creation

*huggles*

beautiful =){{{{{{Me}}}}}}Love,

Good morning poet. Wishing you a day of meadow flowers and heartsongs. Smiles & Hugs

RYN: Yes, it’s going to be called “Let It Be…Naked”. I grew to like it, but I remember when I first got the old version, I didn’t like it that much. It just didn’t compare with the other albums, even though the songs were great. I wanted or expected it to sound like their final concert that they did on the roof of Apple Records.

Armiel

October 7, 2003

How do you write this way (wonderfully) so early in the morning? *laughs* ***hugs***

Lovely. Mind if I put that first one on my fridge?

XistDense

Sigh, lovely whittering.

Starr418

*smiles* Beautiful!!

LiteBrite

Wow… these were both really powerful… just beautiful! 🙂

🙂

Wow. A gentle lovely Lioness poem and a powerful FeLion poem too. Both great. Big Hugs : )

Gilraen Tinehtele

🙂 you inspire me *runs to put notebook in bag*

The Rickster

Such wonderful loving words….

CanadianJade

So tender and beautiful. Such a talent to be able to put thoughts in words so succinctly.

Meginsanity

I love these. ryn: *smile* Thanks.

glitter & wings.

excellently described as always. xoxo,

i really like the first poem a lot. is it a poem? or should i call it a whitter? i don’t know the correct terminology. all i know, is it is a beautiful love poem. it really moved me. so full of love. *hugs*

Singing Nun

October 9, 2003

C – These are just beautiful. Your deep love for Follain is very evident in your whitters.