An afternoon in the park

Poinsett State Park,
near Sumter, S.C.,
Feb. 10, 5 p.m.

I’m sitting in my chair at this beautiful state park under some tall pines, listening to the wind coming and going in the trees. It’s so incredibly peaceful and quiet on a Sunday afternoon in early February.

For the longest time, I have been the only one here. It’s not the popular season to visit, but still I can’t understand why so few are enjoying this natural beauty. The perfect stillness and quiet persist until a family with small children arrive, the kids dashing out of the car to chase squirrels.

I can see the calm surface of Old Levi’s Mill Lake in front of me beyond the trees. The day has been cloudy, alternating with clearing patches of sky. Then dark clouds and a sprinkle of rain. They dissipate and it’s blue skies again. The sun keeps breaking through, again and again.

A little while ago, I was walking along the banks of Shanks Creek which feeds the lake. Its crystal clear waters are spring-fed and flow constantly over a white-sand bottom. Most of the creeks and ponds in the county hereabouts are dry or drying up with the lingering drought, but this little creek is steady and a reliable supply of water for the lake.

I love to watch flowing water. I am quite mesmerized by it. I sat down awhile on the banks of the creek to watch it silently moving along, twisting and turning around trees and bends. Occasionally I’d hear it spilling over logs or between rocks. About 8-10 feet wide and 5-6 inches deep, Shank’s Creek is just as I remember it from past visits.

When I was a kid in the 60s, my brother, father and I came here to swim in the lake during summer vacation. I’ll never forget those drives out from Sumter so many years ago now. To a 10-year-old city kid, the 18-mile trip seemed like a long drive deep into piney woodlands, a wilderness so to speak, so different from the urban surroundings I was accustomed to in New Orleans.

As I walked in the forest along the creek, I kept peering off into the woods, clear of undergrowth now in winter, but green with holly trees everwhere in the understory. I liked the way the low sun would illumine the forest floor with a comforting and mellow light, then disappear behind clouds, making that same scene suddenly appear darker and much more mysterious, as if twilight were rapidly approaching.

It’s about time to go now. I hear hawks out over the lake. The wind is picking up. Clouds have rolled in once again. It’ll be dark before long. All the picnic ables are empty. No barbecuing with grilled hamburger and steak aromas wafting along on a breeze. That one family that came earlier — they’re all walking along the earthern dam at the far end of the lake. A Nature outing. I’m glad to see it.

It’s quiet again and the wind seems to be calling to me. I look at those empty and rather forlorn picnic tables and can see distincly the faces of my students eating snacks and drinking sodas, laughing and talking to themselves after finishing a hike along the high hills of the Watereee River just above the lake. That was 20 years ago. Another lifetime ago. The spring of 1982. We had a great time on that field trip. This park and I go back a long way.

Now it’s time to go — before memories vanish, shadows lengthen, and night comes along, offering little or nothing to assuage those feelings of emptiness that will inevitably trail after me at the end of an otherwise pleasant afternoon.

Log in to write a note

Where would we be without our memories? And you have some fine ones! Love,

RYN: Yes, I understand there is a protocol that dictates new writers send their material to lesser-known magazines. I thought I would follow that protocol. But after making up a list of all the magazines, small and large, that I’d like to work with, I decided to work my way down the list rather than up. The rejection will be good for me. You sound as if you don’t approve. Trust me, though

I’ve no delusions of grandeur here. I mailed five submission packages, and expect five rejection slips. Just doing things a bit differently than most. I’m not afraid of the rejection. It’s as much a part of writing as publishing. Take care of you.

Shi
February 13, 2002

This was incredibly beautiful and somewhat bittersweet.

February 13, 2002

To me this entry sounds like a symphony. You know,a musical composition with first a description of the main theme, then a beautiful wandering along its hidden treasures, only “seen” by the composer but brought to life with his great talent, as a wonderful gift to us. Finally he will return to quiet and peace, a last glance, a farewell at the subject, a little sadness and a sweet soft coda. Thanks

bittersweete is a good word for this

You touched on something here that I have pondered time and again as I’ve lingered underneath pines, listening to the wind ebb and sway through them. Question: What word best describes that sound? No other sound comes close, yet the word that matches sound and emotion stirred eludes me. Any suggestions?

February 14, 2002

I always want to follow your path, O. Happy Valentine’s Day,

RYN: You’ll be the second to know–regardless of the outcome. I must admit I feel a bit like an asshole for having submitted them, though. Any experience with that?

Hello again Oswego 🙂

wishing you feelings of fulfillment instead. You noted my od reg diary instead of plus, and i keep forgetting to say thank you… i am rarely there these days. As the shadows lengthen here and the night begins, i wonder how you are.

February 23, 2002

Living in the middle of a city has its advantages… and its disadvantages, as this entry nicely shows. ….I need to spend more time in Portland’s Forest Park, I think.

Wonderful memories. Thank you for sharing. Now I want to have a picnic. 🙂